the graph show the map of islip center. describe it

The first map illustrates the present overview of the Islip town centre and the second map shows the proposed renovation in future in

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, the dual carriageway with a bus station, and the shopping arena with a car park will be new additions to the area

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the main road will be reserved for pedestrians only. Currently, the town has a main road running from east to west with shops on both sides.On the northern aspect of the marts is the countryside but on the southern aspect are the residential areas.An offshoot of the road on the eastern side leads to a park on the southeast

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that on the western side continues until the school on the southwest location. In comparison to its present structure, the planned developments in the region include the construction of a new dual-carriageway encircling the centre.

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, the existing highway would be expanded and restricted for the movement of people walking on foot.

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, the shops on the northern side will be converted into a shopping mall with an adjacent parking area for vehicles on its east and a bus stop on its west.

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, some new houses will be built on both sides of the walkway,

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, the shops on the southern part will remain as

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May 18, 2024

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