The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, there are 5 steps and 4 resources in manufacturing electricity in geothermal power

plant

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plants

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However

, there is cold water, which is pumping down to the 4.5km depth,

then

a liquid

is going

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goes

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to the injection well process after

it's coming

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it comes

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through

Geometral

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the Geometral

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zone( hot rocks) to the production well,

due to

hot water is pumping up

rigt

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right

to the condenser. Because of the condenser equipment generated steam goes exactly to the turbine and makes it

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apply

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rotate,

as a result

, the generator creates energy powered by the previous machinery.

Finally

, the manufactured electricity is

delivering

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delivered

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to consumers by

the

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apply

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special lines.

This

is a

repetative

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repetitive

process.

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view.

When asked to choose between alife without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answeers and include relevant examples from your own knowlwdge or experience.