You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter: • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in connection with a short course at White College in the UK. I have not been to the UK before. I am a painting student and my course is about new methods in watercolour painting. I will arrive at 6 P.M on 13 July and my departure date is 20 July. Because of the contents of my course, I prefer to live in a single-story building and a bedsit room. I prefer to be alone in my room.

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option helps me to have ample space for my stuff.

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, I would be short-term here and I do not know about that city.

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reason, I am fond of a dormitory in a lively and upbeat atmosphere which offers different recreational facilities,

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as a cinema, pool and shopping centre.

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I was searching for different courses in

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college, I could not find a suitable map or directions for having access to

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place via public transportation. I would appreciate it if you help me with which routes are suitable for getting to and from the college. I am looking forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Ma.ka

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Try to elaborate a bit more on your accommodation needs, such as mentioning any specific requirements like proximity to the university or dietary needs.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea to improve overall coherence.

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You have clearly stated the course details and your arrival/departure dates.

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The letter maintains a suitable and polite tone throughout.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately formal and correctly formatted.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

200 words

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