The diagram below shows the process for producing bottled and canned carbonate drinks.

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The flow chart gives data about the
process
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of making bottled and canned carbonated
drinks
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.
Overall
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, there are five stages in the
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of making ready
drinks
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. Begins with cleaning
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water
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and ends with packaging.
To begin
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with, the
water
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is filtered.
Then
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, filtered
water
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is made softer by
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special machine and some type of chemicals.
The next step is
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, that the
water
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which is mixed with the compound goes through pumps to electric heaters. After that, heated
water
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was blended with carbon dioxide in the special machine.
Following
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this
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, carbonated
water
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is directed to stage three which is mixing. In
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process
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, carbonated
water
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is varied with three types of product (syrup, flavour and colour). After filtering, the
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of producing
drinks
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comes to the fourth stage (filtering and filling stage).
Subsequently
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, the assorted outcome is separated into bottled
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and canned
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. Follow-up, divided liquid refreshments are boxed. In the end, all set dram is delivered to the supermarket.

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