The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first
chart
depicts the energy
consumption patterns of an average Australian household, and the second chart
displays the greenhouse gas
emissions
proportion of each type of energy
use.
In total, 72% of energy
is used for heating and water heating, which causes the major share of greenhouse gas
emissions
. Additionally
, other appliances play a significant role in the greenhouse gas
footprint.
In Australian families, heating is the main source of energy
use with 42%, but it accounts for only 15% of total emissions
which is around two-thirds less than its energy
use share. Additionally
, the water heating portion is approximately one-third in both charts which is the greatest source of gas
emissions
in Australian households.
however
other appliances account for 15% of energy
uses but 28% of emissions
belong to this
title. Also
refrigeration and lighting, with 7% and 4% In the first chart
, have a doubling portion in the second chart
. Furthermore
, cooling has the least share in both pie charts.Submitted by ali.homayoni93 on
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