The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

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The provided line graph illustrates numeral information about book costs in Germany, France, Italy and

Austria

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over the time period of ten

years

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It is clear that

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people spent more money on books from the beginning

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of the graph.

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Austria

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had the highest increase in

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display.

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, In 1995, 80000000 dollars were spent on books in Germany and its number increased slightly until 1999 and

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it declined from 1999 to 2003.

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it rose again until 2005 to around $95 million.

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, France and

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rose slightly over these

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and both of them stopped at one point at around $73 million.

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Austria

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remained steady for 2

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from 1999 to 2001 and

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it rocketed sharply.

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, Italy's number increased from 1995 to 1997 and fell modestly from 1997 to 1999.

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it went up again until 2005 and it became over 60000000 dollars in 2005.

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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany , France , Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

Some people prefer one on one lesson while others like group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are requiered. Discuss both these views and your own opinion.