The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below.
The maps illustrate
about
the development in Pentland which is Change preposition
apply
kind
of coastal zone between 1950 Correct article usage
a kind
to
2007. Correct word choice
and
Overall
, it can be seen that there are many establishment buildings.
Looking in more detail, in 1950, from southern
of the picture, there was a road that connected with the Correct article usage
the southern
sea
. At the beginning of the road, both
Change preposition
on both
right
and left Correct article usage
the right
side
, there was a space for cultivating some grasses. Fix the agreement mistake
sides
Next,
walking forward, the car park was situated to the east, meanwhile the opposite were
Change the verb form
was
location
for some industrial buildings with the Add an article
the location
sea
which
was located in the middle.
Meanwhile, in 2007, from Correct pronoun usage
apply
southern
of the map, there Correct article usage
the southern
is
a road to link to the Wrong verb form
was
sea
. In the right corner, the grassland is diminished and replaced by a lot of houses which are erected for people and
followed by the existence of Correct word choice
apply
the
shops. In the opposite of Correct article usage
apply
these housing area
, the cinema is built near Change the determiner
this housing area
these housing areas
with
another shop area. The previous car park is relocated to western and equipped by multi-storey feature. Change preposition
apply
Industrial
area is replaced by entertainment buildings Add an article
The industrial
such
as a park and swimming pool. In
the opposite, several new apartments are established and the Change preposition
On
sea
is filled by yacht marine zoneSubmitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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