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The line graph illustrates the Dubai gold sales in 2002, showing monthly data points that reflect fluctuations in sales volume throughout the year.

The line graph illustrates the Dubai gold sales in 2002, showing monthly data points that reflect fluctuations in sales volume throughout the year.
The line graph illustrates the Dubai gold
sales
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 in 2002, showing monthly data points that reflect fluctuations in
sales
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 volume throughout the
year
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.
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, the
sales
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 figures varied over the months, peaking in February and gradually increasing from April to August before stabilizing towards the
year
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's end. During the first half of the
year
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,
Dubai
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 gold
sales
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 experienced significant fluctuations.
Sales
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 started around 200
million
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Dirhams
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 in January, spiked to over 350
million
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Dirhams
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 in February,
then
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 dropped to about 125
million
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Dirhams
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 by April.
This
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 downward trend continued into May, with a slight recovery to nearly 150
million
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Dirhams
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 in June and staying just above 100
million
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Dirhams
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 in July.
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, August showed a notable increase, rebounding to approximately 200
million
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Dirhams
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, indicating a reversal in the declining trend. The latter part of the
year
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 saw more stable Dubai gold
sales
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. From September to November,
sales
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 figures remained relatively consistent, ranging from around 150
million
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Dirhams
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 to just under 200
million
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Dirhams
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. There was a minor decrease in October, with
sales
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 at about 175
million
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Dirhams
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, followed by a slight increase in November to nearly 200
million
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Dirhams
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.
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, December ended with
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 volume stabilizing
around
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 200
million
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Dirhams
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, showing consistent performance at the
year
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's close.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, year, million, dirhams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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