The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
Given are two figures providing a comparison of the before and after building of some tourist facilities and amenities on an
island
.
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that on the former map, there were not any facilities, but in the latter numerous amenities have provided ease and comfort for the people who have
traveled
Change the spelling
travelled
show examples
to the area.
According to
what is shown, the pier having been built is the first and foremost change in the second map because it has provided the easiest access for entrance to the
island
.
Moreover
, travellers easily move from the pier to the
receprion
Correct your spelling
reception
and restaurant through
vehicle
Correct article usage
the vehicle
show examples
track and
also
the footpath
have offered
Wrong verb form
offers
show examples
access to everywhere on the
island
.
Additionally
, it is interesting to note that a large number of cottages have been designed in the
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
and the west of the
island
and
also
the reception is near the pier. A huge restaurant has been constructed in the north.
Furthermore
, it is noteworthy to note that the specific zone has been designed for passengers in order to swim.
In contrast
, on the first map passengers
face
Wrong verb form
faced
show examples
a lot of problems
to settle
Change the verb form
settling
show examples
because there were not any facilities to
accommodate
Correct pronoun usage
accommodate them
show examples
.
Submitted by hs.abdolhay70 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
What to do next:
Look at other essays: