The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The

line

graph shows 3

type

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of crime that happened in Newport

town

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Town

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from 2003 to 2012.

Overall

, the

line

gives three

crime

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crimes

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that

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namely

burglary

, car theft and robbery , it is

clearly

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that the highest

point

of

burglary

was in 2004

while

the lowest number of

robbery

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robberies

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made

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up

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apply

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in 2008. Now , Turing

to

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details the

burglary

is

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made u reach the peak in 2004 after that the

line

's

burglary

was

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declined to reach

to

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the lower

point

in 2008

then

goes to wave to reach

in

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the end

line

to under 1500.

While

lie

line

's car theft in the

begin

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remain

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steady until 2005

then

dropped

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the

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a

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lower

point

to

accounted

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by

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for

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above 2000 sequently the red

line

was fluctuated

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fluctuated

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between 2000 and around

2500point

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2500 points

to

arrived

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in

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the

last

point

to

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approximately number 2500 .