The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
The chart
line displays
the ratio of smokers per 1000 people divided by gender in Someland between 1960 to 2000.
Verb problem
shows
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of smoker men fell throughout the years significantly, meanwhile, the smoker women rose slowly. In addition
, at the end
of the period, the rate of smoking males
and females Change preposition
among males
are
nearly similar.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
To begin
with, in 1960, almost 60% of adult males at that time were smoking cigarettes, then
the number of smoking men started to decline gradually, after that it faced a rapid drop from 1990 to 2000.
In terms of women, the number of adult females who were smoking in the 60s where low about 10% but , it started to rise rapidly and reached 30% in 1975, then
the chart was almost steady for 15 years , in the end, the chart decreased and arrived at fifth by the year of 2000.Submitted by neamaabdo90 on
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