The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same to periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie charts illustrate the aftermath of surveys among the guests. Meanwhile, it is a comparison between the former and the later Verb problem
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museum
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people
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were dissatisfied
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had
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constant. Change the verb form
is
however
, After changes more people
are very satisfied.
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people
dissatisfied
40% and later the ratio declined to 15%. Add a missing verb
were dissatisfied
Wherease
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at 15
tourist
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tourists
was recorded
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has recorded
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at a
a
same percentileCorrect article usage
the
5
% in both years.
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satisfied
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satisfaction
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the museum as
it climbed Change the verb form
transforming
dramtically
to 10%. Correct your spelling
dramatically
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were
10
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were 10
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