The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps illustrate the current layout of
Bunborough
and what it will look like after its redevelopment.
Overall
, we can see that a few facilities have been introduced to welcome more tourism in Bunborough
.
Currently, bunborough
is a fish village where only a small part is developed. The houses are in the northeast while
shops and fishing ports are located near the residents. There is only one route for people leaving Bunborough
to nearby cities, such
as Manchester or Lynwich. Although
the accommodations and facilities are only enough for local residents, it is lacking of transportation.
After the redevelopment, there will be some major changes that may introduce tourists. One of the most noticeable developments are
the improvement of the transportation system. First of all, a railway will be built across the city so people have another option to go to the southern city, Lynwich. Change the verb form
is
Moreover
, another road will be built which offers another way for travellers to travel between Bunborough
and Lynwich.
In addition
, in order to attract more tourists. The fishing ports will be demolished and Promenade will be opened at that location. At the same time, two hotels will open, one will be next to the restaurant and the other will be next to the beach.Submitted by puimei822 on
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