Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Scientific research confirms that the majority of humans use

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plenty of fast

food

and it is extremely harmful

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their

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body

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.

However

, some individuals presume that education enables

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humans

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to deal with

this

issue through the essential knowledge provided for consumers,

whereas

some think that

this

method will not be efficient at all

due to

the popularity of junk

food

all around the world.

This

writer believes that the educational system more or less reduces the impact of

this

kind of refreshment. There is no doubt that having a good foundation helps people

with controlling

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their behaviours.

In other words

, being taught about the drawbacks of fast

food

, teenagers

as well as

adults are able to control their intake of harmful fats. Nowadays, in some developed countries, schools often pay a fortune to invite specialists in order to show a wide range of negative effects of fast

food

as well as

the paramount importance of health.

As a result

, it possibly changes consumers’ behaviour and

make

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junk

food

less tempting to children.

However

, some people still believe that

this

process is a waste of money. Obviously, fast

food

gradually turns into

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and is too hard to resist its delicious taste.

This

can

also

be understood that

this

type of refreshment tends to become the best option and be considered as the main

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for teenagers

due to

the fact that it is affordable and convenient.

Therefore

, with

this

enormous attraction, educating people seems to be not noticeable. The young, nowadays, cannot be aware of the damage of junk

food

because of its long-term impacts. Usually,

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involved

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high

level

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of cholesterol in

human

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body tend to become severe

at

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old age;

thus

, teenagers tend to ignore its drawbacks.

That is

the reason why they still need

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guidance from scientists in order to limit the negative sides as much as possible. In conclusion,

founding

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a good habit

about

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eating healthy

food

at a young age with well-preparation at school will help children deal with the disadvantages of fast

food

.