You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the proportion of
workforce
who have a job and their average income, Add an article
the workforce
along with
the percentage of people
with an undergraduate degree in eight counties in Europe in 2015.
Overall
, we can see that there is a positive relationship between the ratio of college graduates, and average wage. The more educated people
a country have
, the more job opportunities and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
salary their
Replace the word
salaries
people
have.
First of all, these eight countries have similar employment rates which between 50.8%, the lowest, in Greece and 72.7%, the highest, in Norway. However
, people
there had different level
of education and average income levels.
Norway (43.2%), the United Kingdom (41.6%) and Luxembourg (41.1%) have the largest proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
high
educated Replace the word
highly
people
in their countries. Four out of ten people
there owned a bachelor
degree. Since Change noun form
bachelor's
workforce
there Correct article usage
the workforce
were
more educated, the employment rates and their average salary were Correct subject-verb agreement
was
also
the highest.
Portugal (22.9%), Bulgaria (27.5%) and Greece (29.1%) have the least
ratio of workers with higher education. Correct word choice
lowest
As a result
, their average incomes were the lowest. Bulgarian's
wages were less than 10% of Change noun form
Bulgarian
Norway
workers.Change noun form
Norway's
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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