the chart below shows some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.

the chart below shows some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008.
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The bar chart illustrates the details of the three major issues that the large populations announced in seven distinctive capitals of the United Kingdom in 2008. Generally speaking, It can be clearly seen that health services and education and training are clearly the biggest issues in all cities,
while
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air pollution has less impact on people there, with Manchester having the highest ratio.
According to
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the figures, health services were the dominant problem, with it being the major issue in five out of seven,
although
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, Belfast and Cardiff had the highest percentages at almost 60%.
In addition
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, there is no significant difference in the graphs for education and training, all exceeding 50 %, except for Manchester and Newcastle with both approximately 45%.
To sum up
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, people in urban areas are concerned most about health services and education training,
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the former was more serious in some cities
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the residents were troubled by the latter in other metropolises. Interestingly, air pollution remained the least significant problem in every city.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordable housing
  • urban areas
  • overcrowding
  • homelessness
  • traffic congestion
  • car ownership
  • public transportation systems
  • commuting times
  • air pollution
  • industrial activities
  • air quality
  • green spaces
  • urbanization
  • mental health
  • crime rates
  • socio-economic factors
  • sense of security
  • waste management
  • waste disposal
  • recycling
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