The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
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The given floorplans illustrate information pertaining to the transformation of a bookstore from 2000 until the present day.
Overall
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, the most noticeable change is that all the book sections were relocated
while
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adding more public amenities.
Additionally
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, the facilities in front of the entrance remained intact. Beginning with the left-hand side, there were no changes that occurred with the main entrance
as well as
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the travel and new
books
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area.
Similarly
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, the service desk in the bottom left corner stayed untouched. Moving onto the centre of the shop, there used to be shelves for art, hobbies and cookery
books
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in the middle but they were replaced by a reading area. Concurrently, on the horizontal shelf at the top, the fiction
books
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were reduced in number to make room for art, hobbies and cookery
books
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. Moving onto the right half of the plan, the non-fiction area was reconstructed into a cafe.
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, there is no longer a fiction site at the top right corner since it was repurposed into a non-fiction category.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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