You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table gives
the
information on the underground train system in six capital cities around the world with Correct article usage
apply
the
breakdown Correct article usage
a
on
the figures Change preposition
of
of
lines and length, Change preposition
for
as well as
the annual revenue and the cost of tickets. Overall
, we can see that the situation varies from country to country.
New York City Subway
, London Tube and Beijing Subway
have the longest underground systems out of the six cities which
each approximately over 250 miles. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Whereas
, the total length of Tokyo
Correct article usage
the Tokyo
Subway
, Paris Metro and Mexico City Metro are
less than 200 miles.
In terms of revenue, Tokyo Change the verb form
is
Subway
and Beijing Subway
has
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
have
profit
, which doubled those from the other four countries, at 3.1 Fix the agreement mistake
profits
billions
US dollars and 3.6 Fix the agreement mistake
billion
billions
respectively. Change to singular
billion
However
, interestingly, the cost of single
ticket for these two cities Add an article
a single
are
quite low ($1.64 in Tokyo and $0.45 in Beijing) compared to $2.50 in New York and $2.3 in Paris.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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