The graphs below show the number of public transit passengers from 1989 to 2009 and bus and tram passenger numbers between 2000 and 2009 in Melbourne.

The graphs below show the number of public transit passengers from 1989 to 2009 and bus and tram passenger numbers between 2000 and 2009 in Melbourne.
The
first
line graph indicates public transportation user
numbers
between 1989 and 2009 and the second one shows the number of bus and
tram
passengers
from 2000 to 2008 in Melbourne.
According to
the
first
graph,
it is clear that
the number of public transit
passengers
went up continuously over the 20-year period. About 290
million
people in Melbourne consistently used public transport for the
first
five years and
then
public transport passenger
numbers
gradually grew. Since 2004, it has seen a rapid increase to nearly 500
million
. In the second graph, it is apparent that even though bus and
tram
passenger
numbers
reached over 200
million
in the final year in Melbourne, their patterns of change were significantly different. The number of bus
passengers
remained stable for the
first
three years,
however
, it constantly ascended until 2008
while
that of
tram
passengers
fluctuated several times.
Tram
user
numbers
went up slightly before falling in 2004. After that, they sharply soared by over 70
million
between 2007 and 2008.
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