The bar charts below give information on the road transport in a number of European countries.

The bar charts below give information on the road transport in a number of European countries.
The bar chart illustrates the data proportion of transport which is running on the road in Europe by
comapring
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comparing
competing
in three types of transporting.
Overall
, compared
from
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to
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the information by countries,
travel
person
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by person
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by car and commuting time
which
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apply
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are
high
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higher
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level
than
travel
person
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by person
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by bus,
trains
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train
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and
others
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other
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. To start with,
travel
person by car, the data shown by
killometres
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kilometres
per year, Which
is
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are
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two
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the two
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nations are highest, Denmark and France. In the
mean time
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meantime
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Itay,
United
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the United
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Kingdom and
Eu
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Europe
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average are
stadily
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still
in
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at
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the same average
level
, despite Germany and Spain
were
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being
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the lowest
level
.
In
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On
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the other hand
travel
by bus, Train, and
others
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other
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. Denmark
was reach
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was reached
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on top of
this
data, In spite of that other
nation
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nations
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were almost
in
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at
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th
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the
same
level
.
However
, all
mode
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modes
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in both
way
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ways
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Germany and
UK
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the UK
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spending
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spend
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45
minutes
in
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on
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average for travelling and Denmark and France spend around 40
minutes
. Spain and
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the Eu
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Eu Average
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are
the
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same
level
which
are
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is
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spending 30
minutes
each day
for
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apply
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travelling and Italy
waas
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is
only
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the only
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one
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apply
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country that
spending
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spends
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20
minutes
on the road for
tranporting
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travelling
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words travel, level, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • volume of road transport
  • economic activity
  • population density
  • infrastructure quality
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental pollution
  • road safety
  • policies or measures
  • public transport
  • road improvements
  • emissions regulations
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