The bar charts below give information on the road transport in a number of European countries.
The bar chart illustrates the data proportion of transport which is running on the road in Europe by
comapring
in three types of transporting.
Correct your spelling
comparing
competing
Overall
, compared from
the information by countries, Change preposition
to
travel
person
by car and commuting time Change preposition
by person
which
are Correct pronoun usage
apply
high
Correct word choice
higher
level
than travel
person
by bus, Change preposition
by person
trains
and Fix the agreement mistake
train
others
.
To start with, Correct quantifier usage
other
travel
person by car, the data shown by killometres
per year, Which Correct your spelling
kilometres
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
two
nations are highest, Denmark and France. In the Correct article usage
the two
mean time
Itay, Correct your spelling
meantime
United
Kingdom and Correct article usage
the United
Eu
average are Correct your spelling
Europe
stadily
Correct your spelling
still
in
the same average Change preposition
at
level
, despite Germany and Spain were
the lowest Wrong verb form
being
level
.
In
the other hand Change preposition
On
travel
by bus, Train, and others
. Denmark Correct quantifier usage
other
was reach
on top of Change the verb form
was reached
was reaching
this
data, In spite of that other nation
were almost Fix the agreement mistake
nations
in
Change preposition
at
th
same Correct your spelling
the
level
. However
, all mode
in both Fix the agreement mistake
modes
way
Germany and Change to a plural noun
ways
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
spending
45 Wrong verb form
spend
minutes
in
average for travelling and Denmark and France spend around 40 Change preposition
on
minutes
. Spain and Correct article usage
the Eu
Eu Average
are Correct your spelling
European average
the
same Change preposition
at the
level
which are
spending 30 Correct subject-verb agreement
is
minutes
each day for
travelling and Italy Change preposition
apply
waas
Correct your spelling
is
only
Correct article usage
the only
one
country that Correct pronoun usage
apply
spending
20 Wrong verb form
spends
minutes
on the road for tranporting
.Correct your spelling
travelling
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travel, level, minutes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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