The charts bellow give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Chart one contains detailed data about
millions
of UK
residents
visit to
various Wrong verb form
visiting
countries
as well as
other nationalities or residents
visited
Correct pronoun usage
who visited
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
UK
in
between the years 1979 to 1994. Chart 2 illustrates the information about the Change preposition
apply
millions
of UK
people visited
Correct pronoun usage
who visited
to
the most popular Remove the preposition
apply
countries
in the world by
1999.
From the Change preposition
in
year
1979 to 1984, only about 12 to 20 million
UK
citizens visited to
various Remove the preposition
apply
countries
.
Further
, after five years the number reached to
30 Change preposition
apply
millions
. Change to singular
million
Subsequently
, the millions
of UK
residents
Correct pronoun usage
who visted
visted
to the overseas Correct your spelling
visited
countries
gradully
increased by 45 Correct your spelling
gradually
million
in the year
1994 and more than 50 million
by the year
1999. Interestingly, almost 12 million
of
Change preposition
apply
UK
residents
preferred to visit
France, and, secondly
, they picked up
Spain as the most suitable to Change preposition
apply
visit
with nearly about 8 million
people. Further
, the USA, Greece and Turkey were in
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apply
a
least priority Change the article
the
to
the Change preposition
for
UK
people to visit
.
Like the UK
citizens, other nationalities were also
visited to the UK
from the year
1979 to 1999. However
, compared with the UK
visitors, the millions
of overseas residents
visited to the UK
is half of that only i.e., 28 miilion
.
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million
Overall
, UK
citizens or residents
prefer to visit
other countries
was more due to
multiple reasons and most of them interested to go
Frane and Spain. Verb problem
in
Whereas
, the other countries
didn't give much priority to see
the Wrong verb form
seeing
UK
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