The charts bellow give information about travel to and from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The charts bellow give information about travel to and  from UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Chart one contains detailed data about
millions
of
UK
residents
visit to
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visiting
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various
countries
as well as
other nationalities or
residents
visited
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who visited
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to
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the
UK
in
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between the years 1979 to 1994. Chart 2 illustrates the information about the
millions
of
UK
people
visited
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who visited
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to
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the most popular
countries
in the world
by
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in
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1999. From the
year
1979 to 1984, only about 12 to 20
million
UK
citizens visited
to
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apply
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various
countries
.
Further
, after five years the number reached
to
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30
millions
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.
Subsequently
, the
millions
of
UK
residents
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who visted
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visted
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visited
to the overseas
countries
gradully
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gradually
increased by 45
million
in the
year
1994 and more than 50
million
by the
year
1999. Interestingly, almost 12
million
of
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UK
residents
preferred to
visit
France, and,
secondly
, they picked
up
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Spain as the most suitable to
visit
with nearly about 8
million
people.
Further
, the USA, Greece and Turkey were
in
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a
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the
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least priority
to
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for
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the
UK
people to
visit
. Like the
UK
citizens, other nationalities were
also
visited to the
UK
from the
year
1979 to 1999.
However
, compared with the
UK
visitors, the
millions
of overseas
residents
visited to the
UK
is half of that only i.e., 28
miilion
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million
.
Overall
,
UK
citizens or
residents
prefer to
visit
other
countries
was more
due to
multiple reasons and most of them interested
to go
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Frane and Spain.
Whereas
, the other
countries
didn't give much priority to
see
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seeing
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the
UK
.
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