Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In contemporary times, the majority of

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schools

are providing unhealthy

foods

to their

students

during their lunch breaks

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and

finds

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it more profitable than selling healthy

meals

.

This

essay will oppose selling unhealthy

meals

to

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children

. It will discuss the problems that are causing in the

students

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student's

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health

. Following that it will discuss the necessary actions that can be taken to make

children

avoid eating unhealthy

foods

. The

students

are more attracted towards

eathing

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eating

unhealthy

foods

and sugary

drinks

.

In addition

to

this

, some

schools

are selling unhealthy

foods

or

drinks

to the

students

for their lunch. The recent survey which was taken among different

schools

illustrates that

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up to sixty to seventy

percent

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of the

schools

are selling oily or

unheathy

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unhealthy

meals

and

drinks

to their

students

for their own profit.

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it

also

states that

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almost 50

percent

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per cent

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of the

students

are facing

health

issues because of their food habits. It was observed that the main issue among all the

children

was obesity and regular sickness. The

school

should be the place where

students

should learn good habits rather than learning to lead an unhealthy life. The

schools

as well as

parents should try to bring

awarness

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awareness

to their

children

about

health

issues that were caused because of eating junk food. The

awarness

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awareness

program should be contacted

to

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all the

students

.

Although

it is more profitable for the

schools

on selling

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to sell

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unhealthy

meal

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meals

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, they should avoid providing them.

Instead

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they should sell healthy

meal

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meals

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and make the

students

to

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understand

about

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the advantages of eating healthy

foods

. The best example

for

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this

will be my

school

.

While

was

studing

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studying

in

school

, they used to provide a healthy meal

along with

that they

also

provided

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notice that included all the

health

benefits of the meal that they were serving.

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bought

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an

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awarness

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awareness

to a lot of

students

in my

school

including me. In conclusion,

the

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schools

should avoid providing unhealthy

meals

to their

students

.

Furthermore

, they should try to bring

awarness

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awareness

to all the

students

to eat appropriate food and lead a healthy life.

In addition

to that fruit juices can be provided to the

studend

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students

instead

of sugary

drinks

. Not only the

shools

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schools

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but

also

parents should make their

children

to

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eat healthy

foods

.