The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The presented line graph gives information about the rate of utilizing

smokes

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smoke

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per one thousand

individiuals

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individuals

in Someland

during

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over

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40 years. at

the

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apply

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first glance, it seems that using smokes of wales had decreased moderately,

while

the number of females who

was

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smoking

had

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jumped rapidly in the first fifteen years

Bacu

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According

to the details, in 1960, the amount of

smokes

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smoking

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had

picu

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a picu

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point for men,

whereas

this

data for women was very low. From the

picu

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picture

point of the variety of smokes

which

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apply

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used by women, had declined

the

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over the

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next 25 years. The rate of smoking per 1000 men, which had dropped during the given period, and the amount of smoking per 1000 females was equal point approximately in 2000.