It is a good idea to have large public spaces in towns and cities such as parks and squares. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

There is

ongoing

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debate among urban dwellers that spaces like large

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should be included in urban and town planning. Numerous public bodies like

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and

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council

also

support

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cause.

parks

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act like

green

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lungs of

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the city

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and

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out carbon

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in the

city

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essay will discuss why we should support

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large

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in cities and towns.

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with, towns and cities are becoming congested

due to

unplanned development and

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migration of masses from

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the countryside

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. To accommodate

rising

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population trees are cut and residential buildings are constructed.

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will result in more pollution and less greenery for future

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development

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with

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keeping greenery in mind, we can lessen the problem of pollution in

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way. To exemplify Urban planners have started taking note of the griefness of the problem across the globe. Green

arras

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such

as

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promote and provide fresh air to dwellers who

resides

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near

by

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the areas. It acts as

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purifier for

masses

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living in those areas. large

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have dedicated

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plans

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for trees,

plant

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plants

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, and grass. People should believe that we should have ample green space for coming generations so that we can live and breathe in fresh air.

City

and town

council

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councils

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must have planning for large

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in their development proposal for cities and towns. To illustrate many

NGOS

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NGOs

have filed cases against municipalities for violating norms of building large

parks

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. In

conclusion

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large

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are necessities of today.

Due to

rising pollution and traffic

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congestion

congestation

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it is imperative now to have large

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