Topic: The pie chart gives information on UAE government spending in 2000. The total budget was AED 315 billion.
The supplied pie chart illustrates some data about where the government budget (AED 315
billion
) was spent during 2000 in UAE.
Overall
, there were 10 sections for spending the budget with social security being the most remarkable in the pie chart.
As can be seen, approximately one third
of the money was expended Add a hyphen
one-third
for
social security, Change preposition
on
while
both transport and industry, agriculture and employment contained only 9 and 17 billion
respectively which were the least part of the chart.
It is clearly shown that,
53 Remove the comma
apply
billion
of budget
was for health and personal social services. Add an article
the budget
Furthermore
, 15 billion
was consumed for housing heritage and environment
. Correct article usage
the environment
Similarly
, law and order experienced the same pattern with only 2
Correct article usage
a 2
billion
increase compared with housing heritage and environment. Additionally
, the amount of debt interest was 23 billion
as same as other expenditure
. Generally speaking, Fix the agreement mistake
expenditures
Correct article usage
the defense’s
defense’s
section was 22 Change noun form
defense
billion
.Submitted by abhari1997 on
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