The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian boys and girls school pupils) attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentage of Australian
boys
and girls
attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.
Overall
, football was the most popular activity
for boys
and for girls
the highest activity
was netball
.
As the bar chart shows, in Australia swimming sport was 17% for girls
, but for boys
was 12%. The football was 20% for boys
, but for girls
was 4%. The most famous activity
for girls
netball
was 18%, but unfortunately, this
game for boys
was 2%. Regarding the
basketball Change preposition
The
activity
was almost the same for boys
and girls
. For boys
was 3% and for girls
was 5%. When the football game was extremely increased among the boys
, the netball
activity
was sharply decreased. Footballfootball
was the slowest sport for Correct your spelling
Football football
girls
and the most popular for them was netball
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