The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the total number of customers in four different junk food shops from the year 1990 to 2015 with five-year intervals.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the trajectory of
Pizza
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Hut
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and Chicken Spot is the same, going downwards.
However
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, Both Donut Bro and Burger Bar had an upward trend and the Donut Bro surpassed others in the
last
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ten years of the record.
To begin
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with, customers of
Pizza
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Hut
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in 1990 was 80,000 and continuously dropped to 60,000 in 2005. A noticeable oscillation of
Pizza
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Hut
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was seen between 2005 and 2015,
besides
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ending the period at nearly 50,000.
Moreover
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, Chicken Spot which represented 60,000 in 1990 minimally went down to well under 6 before surging and arrived its peak at 70,000. It dramatically nosedived to 40,000 in 2005
then
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gradually declined to 30,000 in 2015.
Additionally
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, Donut Bro customers were about approximately 2.5 in 1990 and it overwhelmingly soared to the same number as
Pizza
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Hut
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in 2005, which was 60,000. It still shot up to reach a peak at 80,000 in the final year of record.
Lastly
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, Burger Bar remained stable at well over 1 for five years and
then
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slightly increased to the end at almost 40,000.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hut with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuated
  • steady rise
  • declined gradually
  • significant growth
  • overtook
  • peaked at
  • dipped to
  • remained stable
  • saw a surge in
  • experienced a slump
  • outperformed
  • lagged behind
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