The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annyl income in 2007,2011,2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annyl income in 2007,2011,2015.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of American households
according to
their annual salary in 2007, 2011, and 2015. One notable thing is that
two
groups
whose annual income didn’t exceed 50
millions
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dollars
totaled over 50
million
in 2007, with figures
25
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million
dollars
and roughly 28
million
dollars
, respectively. Meanwhile, it is obvious that the richest group showed the highest
number
with
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reaching almost 30
million
. It is
also
easy to observe that the
two
lowest salary
groups
had an increase in the population in 2011.
On the other hand
, there was
an
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dwindling
number
of the richest person.
However
, the total population of the
two
groups
(less than 49
million
dollars
) slightly decreased,
while
the figure of the group who earned the money
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most surged to 33
million
dollars
in 2015. In comparison,
two
middle salary
groups
(between 50
million
and 99
million
dollars
) remained the fourth and fifth throughout the period and there were not any big differences in
number
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of the population.
Overall
, the data clearly shows that the richest and the most poor
housholds
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households
accounted for the majority in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
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