The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annyl income in 2007,2011,2015.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of American households according to
their annual salary in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
One notable thing is that two
groups
whose annual income didn’t exceed 50 millions
Change to singular
million
dollars
totaled over 50 million
in 2007, with figures 25
Change preposition
of 25
million
dollars
and roughly 28 million
dollars
, respectively. Meanwhile, it is obvious that the richest group showed the highest number
with
reaching almost 30 Change preposition
apply
million
.
It is also
easy to observe that the two
lowest salary groups
had an increase in the population in 2011. On the other hand
, there was an
dwindling Change the article
a
number
of the richest person. However
, the total population of the two
groups
(less than 49 million
dollars
) slightly decreased, while
the figure of the group who earned the money the
most surged to 33 Correct article usage
apply
million
dollars
in 2015. In comparison, two
middle salary groups
(between 50 million
and 99 million
dollars
) remained the fourth and fifth throughout the period and there were not any big differences in number
of the population.
Change the article
a number
the number
Overall
, the data clearly shows that the richest and the most poor housholds
accounted for the majority in 2007, 2011, and 2015.Correct your spelling
households
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