You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given map illustrates two suitable places (S1 and S2) for a shopping mall to be built in the
city
of
brandfield
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Bradfield
brand field
.
Overall
, it can be seen that Both of
points
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have access to the
city
centre
while
have
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access to the different facilities from each other. on the one hand, S1 is located right beneath the housing state in
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the north
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north west
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and just above the
city
center
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though it is far from
industrial
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state
while
S2 is located just next to it in
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the south
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south west
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and is only
few
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blocks away from the centre of the
city
. The golf course and park
is
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not
accessibale
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accessible
for both
location
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because it is located in the east
while
S1 and S2 are located almost in the west of the
brandfield
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brand field
Bradfield
.
On the other hand
. S1 has better access to
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veriety
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variety
of transportation's way
such
as the river, the road and the railway .
Although
the latter is reachable just by the railway and the road.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • city planners
  • proposed
  • shopping mall
  • the main features
  • comparisons
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • recommendation
  • site selection
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