You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given map illustrates two suitable places (S1 and S2) for a shopping mall to be built in the
city
of brandfield
. Correct your spelling
Bradfield
brand field
Overall
, it can be seen that Both of points
have access to the Correct article usage
the points
city
centre while
have
access to the different facilities from each other.
on the one hand, S1 is located right beneath the housing state in Change the verb form
having
Add an article
the north
north west
and just above the Add a hyphen
north-west
city
center
though it is far from Change the spelling
centre
industrial
state Add an article
the industrial
while
S2 is located just next to it in Add an article
the south
south west
and is only Add a hyphen
south-west
few
blocks away from the centre of the Change the article
a few
city
. The golf course and park is
not Change the verb form
are
accessibale
for both Correct your spelling
accessible
location
because it is located in the east Fix the agreement mistake
locations
while
S1 and S2 are located almost in the west of the brandfield
.
Correct your spelling
brand field
Bradfield
On the other hand
. S1 has better access to Correct article usage
a veriety
veriety
of transportation's way Correct your spelling
variety
such
as the river, the road and the railway . Although
the latter is reachable just by the railway and the road.Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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