The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the
proportion
of first-year Use synonyms
teachers
with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation who were recruited to teach French and Use synonyms
English
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language
in Ontario from 2001 to 2007.
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Overall
, what stands out is that a sharp contrast can be seen between French and Linking Words
English
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teachers
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while
the Linking Words
proportion
of French Use synonyms
language
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teachers
climbed gradually, the percentage of Use synonyms
English
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teachers
dropped significantly.
In 2001, the Use synonyms
proportion
of French Use synonyms
language
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teachers
was approximately 70%. Within a year, Use synonyms
this
figure saw a downward trend reaching a low of 50%. In the following years, Linking Words
this
percentage experienced a moderate increase, peaking at nearly 75% in late 2006.
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In contrast
, the Linking Words
proportion
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English
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language
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teachers
showed a significant decrease from over 70% in 2001 to 40% by the mid 2002. Use synonyms
Then
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this
trend rose slightly till the middle of 2004 and continued falling dramatically Linking Words
thereafter
, reaching a low point at under 30% by late 2006.Linking Words
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