The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the
proportion
of first-year
teachers
with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation who were recruited to teach French and
English
language
in Ontario from 2001 to 2007.
Overall
, what stands out is that a sharp contrast can be seen between French and
English
teachers
,
while
the
proportion
of French
language
teachers
climbed gradually, the percentage of
English
teachers
dropped significantly. In 2001, the
proportion
of French
language
teachers
was approximately 70%. Within a year,
this
figure saw a downward trend reaching a low of 50%. In the following years,
this
percentage experienced a moderate increase, peaking at nearly 75% in late 2006.
In contrast
, the
proportion
of
English
language
teachers
showed a significant decrease from over 70% in 2001 to 40% by the mid 2002.
Then
this
trend rose slightly till the middle of 2004 and continued falling dramatically
thereafter
, reaching a low point at under 30% by late 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, teachers, english, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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