The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart gives information about the
proportion
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of first-year
teachers
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with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation who were recruited to teach French and
English
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language
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in Ontario from 2001 to 2007.
Overall
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, what stands out is that a sharp contrast can be seen between French and
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teachers
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,
while
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the
proportion
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of French
language
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teachers
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climbed gradually, the percentage of
English
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teachers
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dropped significantly. In 2001, the
proportion
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of French
language
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teachers
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was approximately 70%. Within a year,
this
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figure saw a downward trend reaching a low of 50%. In the following years,
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percentage experienced a moderate increase, peaking at nearly 75% in late 2006.
In contrast
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, the
proportion
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of
English
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language
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teachers
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showed a significant decrease from over 70% in 2001 to 40% by the mid 2002.
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this
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trend rose slightly till the middle of 2004 and continued falling dramatically
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, reaching a low point at under 30% by late 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, teachers, english, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • steady increase
  • growing demand
  • notable decline
  • budget cuts
  • student enrollment
  • temporary stabilization
  • policy adjustments
  • economic improvements
  • post-2005
  • long-term educational strategies
  • recruitment needs
  • budgetary restraints
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