The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in 3 countries are most concerned about.

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There are three pie charts illustrating the results of the examination of environmental issues in which people are concerned about the condition of the three countries mostly.

Overall

, the largest proportion of each pie chart is dedicated to

overpopulation

in Zambia and Singapore,

while

waste

disposal is the biggest amount in Cameroon. Pollution is the lowest segment in each chart. It can be seen

overpopulation

is the biggest concern in Zambia with 43%, followed by approximately a quarter dedicated to global warming.

Besides

waste

disposal and pollution have the same percentage of 14%.

Likewise

overpopulation

is the largest amount in Singapore with 37%, approximately a quarter of global warming belongs to 26%. But 21% and 16% are dedicated to

waste

disposal and pollution. These percentages are different in Cameroon.

Waste

disposal is the major issue for

this

country with more than 40%.

Overpopulation

is the next problem with just under a quarter. Global warming with just under 20% and 16% is related to 16%.

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