The charts below show the survey results for which environmental problems people in 3 countries are most concerned about.

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There are three pie charts illustrating the results of the examination of environmental issues in which people are concerned about the condition of the three countries mostly.

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, the largest proportion of each pie chart is dedicated to

overpopulation

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in Zambia and Singapore,

while

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waste

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disposal is the biggest amount in Cameroon. Pollution is the lowest segment in each chart. It can be seen

overpopulation

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is the biggest concern in Zambia with 43%, followed by approximately a quarter dedicated to global warming.

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waste

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disposal and pollution have the same percentage of 14%.

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overpopulation

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is the largest amount in Singapore with 37%, approximately a quarter of global warming belongs to 26%. But 21% and 16% are dedicated to

waste

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disposal and pollution. These percentages are different in Cameroon.

Waste

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disposal is the major issue for

this

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country with more than 40%.

Overpopulation

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is the next problem with just under a quarter. Global warming with just under 20% and 16% is related to 16%.

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Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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pie chart about electricity production in Australia adn france