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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdoms, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide in metric
tonnes
 per person in four countries which are respectively the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 Italy and Portugal showed an upward trend,
while
 the United Kingdom and Sweden went down over the
40
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40-year
years
 period. In 1967, there was a dramatic rise until 1977 by almost 6 metric
tonnes
then
 the growth
contunied
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continued
 slightly between 1977 and 1997 after that it remained stable until the end of the period with around 8 metric
tonnes
. The carbon dioxide emissions of Italy started at under
the
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2 metric
tonnes
 afterwards
it
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 had a steady increase from 1967 to1987.
Although
,
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 the amount of CO2 in Italy went up in
next
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the next
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 10
years
 , the metric
tonnes
 didn't change in
last
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 10
years
. The number of carbon
emission
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emissions
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 in Sweden rose significantly until it reached the top of peak
from
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8 to 10. Followed by it had considerable decrease next 30
years
.
Lastly
, the tonne of United Kingdom demonstrated downward trend during 40
years
 period which started from
rougly
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roughly
 11 to around 9 metric
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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