The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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indicated

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indicates

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the numbers of

percentage

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the percentage

a percentage

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of how many people

are

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apply

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living in four Asian countries in cities

during

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from

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1970 to 2020 and the

predicitons

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predictions

prediction

for 2030 and 2040. A glance at the graph

illustrated

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that the percentage of the

population

in four

asian

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Asian

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countries climbed up during 1970 to 2020.

Moreover

, the prediction of the amount

of

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that

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the

population

increased

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more sharply

in

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from

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2030 to 2040. As can be seen from

this

diagram, the

population

in Thailand and Indonesia went up apparently

during

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from

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1970 to 2020. For Thailand, it increased

about

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by about

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10 % compared to the beginning; at the same

time

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time,

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it was the most steady one.

On the other hand

, the

population

of Indonesia increased

about

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by

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nearly one-third.

In contrast

, Malaysia and

Philippines

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the Philippines

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are

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both

climed

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climbed

claimed

up apparently until 2020, yet Malaysia's fluctuated between 1980 and 2010;

whereas

Philippines's

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the Philippines's

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reached a peak

in

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at

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the end of 2020.

In addition

to the prediction between 2030 and 2040, all of these four countries rose rapidly.