The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart
indicated
the numbers of Wrong verb form
indicates
percentage
of how many people Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
are
living in four Asian countries in cities Unnecessary verb
apply
during
1970 to 2020 and the Change preposition
from
predicitons
for 2030 and 2040.
A glance at the graph Correct your spelling
predictions
prediction
illustrated
that the percentage of the Wrong verb form
illustrates
population
in four Use synonyms
asian
countries climbed up during 1970 to 2020. Change the capitalization
Asian
Moreover
, the prediction of the amount Linking Words
of
the Change preposition
that
population
Use synonyms
increased
more sharply Wrong verb form
will increase
in
2030 to 2040.
As can be seen from Change preposition
from
this
diagram, the Linking Words
population
in Thailand and Indonesia went up apparently Use synonyms
during
1970 to 2020. For Thailand, it increased Change preposition
from
about
10 % compared to the beginning; at the same Change preposition
by about
time
it was the most steady one. Add a comma
time,
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
population
of Indonesia increased Use synonyms
about
nearly one-third.
Change preposition
by
In contrast
, Malaysia and Linking Words
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
are
both Unnecessary verb
apply
climed
up apparently until 2020, yet Malaysia's fluctuated between 1980 and 2010; Correct your spelling
climbed
claimed
whereas
Linking Words
Philippines's
reached a peak Correct article usage
the Philippines's
in
the end of 2020. Change the preposition
at
In addition
to the prediction between 2030 and 2040, all of these four countries rose rapidly.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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