The road near your house is completely unsuitable for traffic. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: • Introduce yourself; • Explain what the problem is; • Tell what would you like to be done. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Mr. Mayer I am John Scot and I am currently living in "Locky Hill" next to the "Barlie Road". I am writing to request your urgent action for congested traffic

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road's improper construction. As you are aware of the narrow lanes of the street, I should mention that

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situation

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to a population increase in the area leads to a large number of cars which are being driven daily through

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street. Everybody gets stuck in heavy traffic and moves at a snail's pace to reach his home. The situation exacerbates when it rains and all people get angry and shout at the others but there is no alternative way. I kindly ask you to finish the widening project of the street or provide a new path to reach our neighbourhood. If there is another way, the drivers will not have to enter

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narrow path. I look forward to seeing your response and making the situation better. Sincerely yours, John Scot

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task achievement

Try to provide more specific suggestions for improving the road, such as suggesting certain construction methods or timelines.

coherence cohesion

Proofread for minor syntax errors, such as 'his home' which could be 'their home' for gender neutrality.

task achievement

The letter effectively introduces the writer and the problem at the beginning.

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The tone of the letter is suitably formal and respectful, fitting the context of addressing a local council.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, contributing to the clarity of the letter.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

168 words

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