The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
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of travellers from three various regions in European countries from 1987 till 2007
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of visitors was higher in 2007,
moreover
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, the most sightseeing places considered by society are the
coast
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and the
lakes
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. The graph depicts the
number
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of people in 1987 and it is obvious that
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a higher
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higher
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a higher
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amount was on the
coast
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with 40 thousand travellers.
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, the lowest amount in 1987 is
lakes
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by 10000.
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, when the time flows in 2002, amount of tourists in the
lakes
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reached the peak point in the line and almost hit the highest point by 75000 which is the same quantity of voyagers on the
coast
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in 2007. After 2002 the total of tourists in the
lakes
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fell rapidly, which is why the sum of journeyers on the
coast
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continues its priority. The
number
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of mountains from 1992 till 2007 is the place with the lowest sightseers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coast, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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