The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of travellers from three various regions in European countries from 1987 till 2007
Overall
, it can be seen that the number
of visitors was higher in 2007, moreover
, the most sightseeing places considered by society are the coast
and the lakes
.
The graph depicts the number
of people in 1987 and it is obvious that Correct article usage
a higher
higher
amount was on the Correct article usage
a higher
coast
with 40 thousand travellers. Moreover
, the lowest amount in 1987 is lakes
by 10000.
Additionally
, when the time flows in 2002, amount of tourists in the lakes
reached the peak point in the line and almost hit the highest point by 75000 which is the same quantity of voyagers on the coast
in 2007. After 2002 the total of tourists in the lakes
fell rapidly, which is why the sum of journeyers on the coast
continues its priority. The number
of mountains from 1992 till 2007 is the place with the lowest sightseers.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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