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The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in million of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the amount of forest areas in 6 different places in 1990, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the biggest proportion of wood is located in Europe and South
America
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 and Oceania belonged to the fewest green areas among the others.
According to
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 the data, Europe and South
America
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 have owned the widest forested lands
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with 989 and 946
million
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hectares
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 in 1990.
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 Europe continued its progress with 998
million
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hectares
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 in 2000 and 1001
million
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hectares
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 in 2005, South
America
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 lost its woods to 904 and 882
million
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hectares
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 in 2000 and 2005. Africa had 749
million
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hectares
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forested
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of forested
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 area in 1990 and
however
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 it levelled out in 2000, eventually,
this
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 number dropped to 691
million
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hectares
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 in 2005. The same pattern has almost happened for North
America
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 with 708,705
million
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hectares
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 and again 705
million
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hectares
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 in 3 given years. In terms of the narrowest forested regions, Asia only possessed 576
million
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hectares
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 in 1990 which followed with a slight drop to 570
million
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hectares
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 in 2000 and again raised to 584
million
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hectares
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.
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,
this
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 number was 199
million
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hectares
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 in 1990 for Oceania and it decreased slightly to 198 and 197
million
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hectares
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 in 2000 and 2005.
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