The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The figures illustrate
percentage
of households using three electrical appliances namely Add an article
the percentage
Use synonyms
refrigerator
, washing machine and vacuum cleaner to do Correct article usage
a refrigerator
housework
and Use synonyms
other
Correct word choice
apply
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
Use synonyms
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
hours
in every home, Use synonyms
housework
per week Use synonyms
is
done from the year 1920 to 2019.
The first figure says Unnecessary verb
apply
majority
of the households used washing Add an article
the majority
a majority
machine
till 1940. After that, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the refrigerator
refrigerator
came into the picture which peaked in 1980 until Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
use
of Add an article
the use
vacuum
Correct article usage
a vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
that
had a steady incline over Correct pronoun usage
which
years
but was 100% as of the Correct article usage
the years
refrigerator
in 2000. Later on, 100% remain Use synonyms
same
for both till 2019. Correct article usage
the same
On the other hand
, Linking Words
use
of washing had an increase till 1960 Correct article usage
the use
then
, reduced by 1980 and again rose to 63% by 2019.
The second figure tells us from the year 1920 to 1980 there Linking Words
has been
a significant decline from 50% to 15% in the Wrong verb form
was
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
per week in one household Use synonyms
while
, it remains Linking Words
same
till 2000. Correct article usage
the same
Further
, from 2000 to 2019 in a span of 19 years the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
hours
of Use synonyms
housework
reduced by 4% to 11%.
In conclusion, the first chart depicts that over a span of Use synonyms
time
people started using Add a comma
time,
Use synonyms
Add an article
the refrigerator
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
more often than washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
and the second chart shows us over the years the Fix the agreement mistake
machines
number
of Use synonyms
hours
has remarkably decreased which signifies people are focusing less Use synonyms
to keep
their residence clean and presentableChange preposition
on keeping
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerator, housework, number, hours with synonyms.
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