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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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The figures illustrate
percentage
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the percentage
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 of households using three electrical appliances namely
refrigerator
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a refrigerator
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, washing machine and vacuum cleaner to do
housework
 and
other
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apply
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shows
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show
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number
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a number
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 of
hours
 in every home,
housework
 per week
is
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apply
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done from the year 1920 to 2019. The first figure says
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of the households used washing
machine
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machines
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 till 1940. After that,
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the refrigerator
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 came into the picture which peaked in 1980 until
use
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the use
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 of
vacuum
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a vacuum
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cleaner
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cleaners
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that
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which
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 had a steady incline over
years
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the years
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 but was 100% as of the
refrigerator
 in 2000. Later on, 100% remain
same
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the same
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 for both till 2019.
On the other hand
,
use
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the use
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 of washing had an increase till 1960
then
, reduced by 1980 and again rose to 63% by 2019. The second figure tells us from the year 1920 to 1980 there
has been
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was
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 a significant decline from 50% to 15% in the
number
 of
hours
 of
housework
 per week in one household
while
, it remains
same
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the same
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 till 2000.
Further
, from 2000 to 2019 in a span of 19 years the
number
 of
hours
 of
housework
 reduced by 4% to 11%. In conclusion, the first chart depicts that over a span of
time
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time,
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 people started using
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the refrigerator
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refrigerator
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refrigerators
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 and vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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 more often than washing
machine
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machines
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 and the second chart shows us over the years the
number
 of
hours
 has remarkably decreased which signifies people are focusing less
to keep
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on keeping
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 their residence clean and presentable
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerator, housework, number, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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