The continued rise in the world’s
population
is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time and there were different causes of it.
This
essay will clarify the reasons for
this
increase.
GlobalCorrect article usage
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population
has grown considerably may be
due to
several factors. The
first
, Add a missing verb
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fallingCorrect article usage
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mortality rate that imbalance between births and deaths
causeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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of Change preposition
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population
growth. The decline
ofChange preposition
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death rates can be caused by good knowledge about healthy
lifestyleFix the agreement mistake
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and
also
there are more medical facilities,
controlsCorrect word choice
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of epidemics.
The Correct article usage
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second,
fertility rates in developing countries have been changing over the past 21 years. Factors associated with increased fertility are social pressure from kin and friends to have another child
or Correct word choice
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happiness that people
tendingWrong verb form
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to want more children, or advanced technology that it makes easier to give birth.
In addition
, cultural and religious factors
also
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in increasing
population
.
AtChange the preposition
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the end, in my
opinionAdd the comma(s)
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improvements in healthcare, vaccinations and medical
intervetionsCorrect your spelling
interventions
intervention
have reduced the risk of illness and death
This
growth continues to confront us with many problems. The
first,
impactsAdd a missing verb
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on resources ,demand for food, water, energy,
landCorrect word choice
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like basic needs. The
second,
economicAdd a missing verb
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effects, rising
population
can strain public finances, lead to unemployment and exacerbate income inequality. The
third,
rapid
population
growth causes urbanization challenges
such
as housing shortages, traffic congestion, air and water pollution and so on. I agree with the idea that people will face
this
problem more in the future
asCorrect word choice
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it is now.
To conclude
,
due
toChange preposition
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many items, the expansion
peopleChange preposition
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poses an urgent problem for the world, they should be educated
withChange preposition
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the effects of overpopulation to control the growing
population
.