The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate an access path that was connected to a hospital in two different years.
Overall
, it can be seen that
although
the main features of the
city
hospital remained over
this
period, spaces for public and private transportation were constructed and the
city
road
was altered dramatically. On the one hand, in 2007 the
city
road
was the main
road
with a cross-section with the hospital
road
where it was surrounded by trees on both sides.
Also
, the ring
road
was constructed over the
city
hospital and it had an entrance to the parking on its east-south where staff and people can park their vehicles there.
On the other hand
, in 2010 the
city
road
and ring
road
experienced a drastic expansion where two big squares were constructed on both sides of the hospital
road
which was connected to those main roads.
Furthermore
, the trees on each side of the hospital
road
were replaced by an area for the bus station which was located on the west side of the hospital
road
. The car park was expanded on the east side of the ring
road
where people could go there and the old parking location was unchanged and allocated to the hospital staff.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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