The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides the number of
households
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households'
household's
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annual income in the US.
This
diagram illustrates the comparison in the following year: 2007, 2011 and 2015. Referring to the chart diagram, those figures gradually changed in these three years. As the $50,000-$74,999 of
group
households increasing performance was nearly tied in these three years, the $75,000-$99,999 of
group
as well.
Then
, the less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 of the
group
was beyond the $100,000 or more of the
group
in 2011, it reached the 30 million. Surprisingly, in 2015, the $100,000 or more of of
group
dramatically increased the number
than
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to
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2011, and the performance
also
reached a peak.
Overall
, the whole number of households compared with 2007's figure, till 2015, the figure subtle increased
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in
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2015. Particularly, the the $100,000 or more of of
group
is the highest performance in
this
diagram.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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