The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Given are two maps providing a comparison of the advancement of the village of Rye Mouth between 1995 and the present.
Overall
, one particularly interesting fact highlighted by the latter map is that a new road forward to the east has been built.
In contrast
, the main roads from the northwest to the southeast and from the west to the east remain without any change.
According to
what is shown, looking at the top of the second map
can be seen
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some new houses on the left-hand side of a golf course have been constructed.
In addition
, the farmland and forest park have been replaced with
the
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a
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golf course and two tennis courts in the northeast.
Furthermore
, a glance at the south can be shown the shop, fish market, fishing port and car park were
domelished
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demolished
/ demolished .
In contrast
,
restaurant
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restaurants
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and apartments in the southwest have been built.
Additionally
, the hotel and cafe remain without any change in the southeast.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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