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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions
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The pie chart depicts the percentage of
forest
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 and
timber
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 in different countries . It is clear from the graph that South
Africa
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 covered the highest ratio of
forest
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 and
timber
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 compared to other countries .
According to
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 what is shown , South
Africa
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 had the most significant percentage of
world
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forest
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 around 25% followed by the
Africa
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 region represented 27% .
However
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, the rate of
world
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forest
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 in South America and Europe was 16% and 17% respectively,
while
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 the value of
world
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forest
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 in Asia became the lowest with figures of about 14% .
On the other hand
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 ,
timber
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 in North America ranked the largest ratio about 30% and South
Africa
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 accounted for half a quarter.Asia and Europe were at 20 and 18 in the same order
whereas
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 the
Africa
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 region witnessed a minimum ratio of 9%.
To sum up
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 we could say that Sotheby’s
Africa
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 and Sotheby’s America dominated the highest value of
world
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timber
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 and
forest
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber, africa, world with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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