Some people say that advertising is extremely succesful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Advertisements have been one of the most popular ways to convince
people
to buy different articles. Many companies argue that this
measurement causes the biggest impact in
the population Change preposition
on
instead
of using other policies. I partially agree with this
statement, and in this
essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.
To start with, it is well-known that human behaviours have been widely studied, then
industries search for doing
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apply
a
specific advertising directed to a special population. Remove the article
apply
As a consequence
of this
, a myriad of professionals such
as psychologists, sociologists, antropologists
, etc, are hired in order to make the best performance in terms of promotion. Correct your spelling
anthropologists
This
means that companies are focus
on Change the verb form
are focusing
are focused
persuade
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persuading
people
who really match with their products to rocket their sales. For example
, in Mexico, research done by a group of sociologists found that most people
are attracted by videogames
because of the Correct your spelling
video games
colors
and movements which release multiple neurotransmitters, Change the spelling
colours
thus
since HD graphical experiences have been created, this
field have
experienced a Change the verb form
has
suddenly
increase in their rates.
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sudden
Conversely
, it has been proved that human beings could
control their own desires Wrong verb form
can
as well as
ignore readily some details. This
is explained because there is an internal regulation done by frontal
cortex in order to avoid performing the most Correct article usage
the frontal
instictive
actions. Correct your spelling
instinctive
Therefore
, humankind omits promotional campaigns not only by distracting themselves but also
considering
the consequences that could be generated if they pay attention to those details. Change preposition
by considering
For example
, behavioral
treatments against addictions demand that Change the spelling
behavioural
people
must ignore advertisements that estimulate
these activities.
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stimulate
estimate
To sum up
, advertising is recognized as one of the most common way
for promotional campaigns. Change to a plural noun
ways
Nevertheless
, many other techniques should be evaluated in order to persuade people
because there are easy forms to avoid or ignore them.Submitted by luciaagudelomotta on
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