You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Prashant,
I am writing
this
letter to you regarding your last
week article pusblished
in the CBC Correct your spelling
published
Time
newspaper claiming that all town Replace the word
Times
centers
Change the spelling
centres
accross
Correct your spelling
across
the
Canada Correct article usage
apply
looks
alike. Correct subject-verb agreement
look
Although
your finding might be correct for other town centers
Change the spelling
centres
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
missisauga
is Correct your spelling
Mississauga
diffrent
with its unique architecture.
I would agree with Correct your spelling
different
your
first half of your post that with urbanisation many cities are focusing on Change the pronoun
the
buiding
skyscapers, large factory outlets, and Correct your spelling
building
shoping
centers which results in cities look copies of Correct your spelling
shopping
eachother
. Correct your spelling
each other
However
, it not
Add a missing verb
is not
same
for Correct article usage
the same
mississauga
, city Change the capitalization
Mississauga
authorites
have carefully Correct your spelling
authorities
planed
layout for our area which includes mixed Correct your spelling
planned
archetecture
for residentails Correct your spelling
architecture
building
and hold the Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
essense
of old Correct your spelling
essence
archetectural
, Mississauaga has multiple Correct your spelling
architectural
architecture
musems
, Correct your spelling
museums
art
Correct word choice
and art
gallery
which showcase Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
rich
past of Correct article usage
the rich
city
and it Add an article
the city
also
have morden green urban spaces.
If you are intrested
Correct your spelling
interested
exploring
my city, I would like to arrange a day tour with my brother who works as a tour guide.
looking forward to Change preposition
in exploring
listen
Change the verb form
listening
form
you.
Yours sincerely,
SandeepCorrect your spelling
from
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