You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter: • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Prashant, I am writing

this

letter to you regarding your

last

week article

pusblished

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published

in the CBC

Time

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newspaper claiming that all town

centers

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centres

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accross

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across

the

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apply

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Canada

looks

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look

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alike.

Although

your finding might be correct for other town

centers

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centres

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but

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apply

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missisauga

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Mississauga

diffrent

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different

with its unique architecture. I would agree with

your

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the

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first half of your post that with urbanisation many cities are focusing on

buiding

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building

skyscapers, large factory outlets, and

shoping

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shopping

centers which results in cities look copies of

eachother

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each other

However

, it

not

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is not

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same

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the same

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for

mississauga

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Mississauga

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, city

authorites

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authorities

have carefully

planed

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planned

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layout for our area which includes mixed

archetecture

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architecture

for residentails

building

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buildings

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and hold the

essense

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essence

of old

archetectural

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architectural

architecture

, Mississauaga has multiple

musems

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museums

art

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and art

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gallery

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galleries

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which showcase

rich

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the rich

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past of

city

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the city

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and it

also

have morden green urban spaces. If you are

intrested

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interested

exploring

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in exploring

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my city, I would like to arrange a day tour with my brother who works as a tour guide. looking forward to

listen

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listening

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form

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from

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you. Yours sincerely, Sandeep

Submitted by sandeepniet17 on Wed May 22 2024

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

165 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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