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development like other natural subjects, so it must be compulsory in high school.
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that painting is very vital, but not have to
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.
On the one hand, the role of classes involving
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helps develop their mental ability, painting and drawing
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facilitate a child’s growth
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or her emotional intelligence. By attending these classes, students stand a chance to learn how to observe works of
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and can look through
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to analyze
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emotions. The major reason is student
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because
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of
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they will apply to express their ideas.
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, if painting to
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in high school, it will have some problems.
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enthusiastic about are, which
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and
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to learn
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seriously.
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amount of time can
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attention
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other classes that
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more
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Secondly
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grade to achieve scores
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subject.
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, despite being as beneficial to a student’s growth as other subjects,
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should
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be obligated in high schools.