The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of electricity
produced from coal.
There are 12 stages in the process
of producing electricity
from coal, beginning with coal mining and ending with storing electricity
and consuming energy in a factory.
In the first stage, people extract coal from a source of minerals and cool is crushed by a crushing machine after mining. in the subsequent step, the delivery cart is filled up with the smashed coal and then
delivered by a truck.
The process
continues with bringing ground coal to gasifiers, an amount of heat given to gasifiers to reduce gas
after that, the produced gas
goes through a cooling process
. While
this
step expels waste heat, the remaining gas
is cleaned. Next,
the gas
power plant receives the clean gas
,
and simultaneously diffuses another amount of waste heat into the air. In the final step, the completely clean Remove the comma
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gas
is used in an electricity
factory to provide a city with electricity
and the other source of electricity
is saved in the warehouse.Submitted by [email protected] on
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