The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity.
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The diagram illustrates the
process
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of
electricity
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produced from coal. There are 12 stages in the
process
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of producing
electricity
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from coal, beginning with coal mining and ending with storing
electricity
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and consuming energy in a factory. In the first stage, people extract coal from a source of minerals and cool is crushed by a crushing machine after mining. in the subsequent step, the delivery cart is filled up with the smashed coal and
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delivered by a truck. The
process
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continues with bringing ground coal to gasifiers, an amount of heat given to gasifiers to reduce
gas
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after that, the produced
gas
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goes through a cooling
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.
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this
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step expels waste heat, the remaining
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is cleaned.
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the
gas
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power plant receives the clean
gas
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and simultaneously diffuses another amount of waste heat into the air. In the final step, the completely clean
gas
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is used in an
electricity
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factory to provide a city with
electricity
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and the other source of
electricity
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is saved in the warehouse.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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