There are different opinions about how
children
can be good
members
of
society
. Some people, including
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believe that
children
should be taught by their
parents
how to function as useful
members
of
society
,
whereas
others think
school
(educational institution) is the best place where they should learn them from.
Given the essential role of
parents
, advocates argue that fathers and mothers should teach their
children
how to be valuable
members
of
society
.
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, they have far-reaching
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in the development of their
children
’s social skills.
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, so they imitate their parent’s
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and imbibe their qualities into them in almost all aspects of their early life.
Thus
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members
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being good
members
of
society
cares for them, and
also
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to
this
issue,
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as , not only
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children
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useful
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society
, but
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a sense of responsibility in them.
For example
, a study in Britain showed that
children
are two times more influenced by their
parents
than their teachers.
For example
, on the dining
parents
should tell their kids to eat quietly and not make unnecessary noises which can develop into a good habit.
Opponents,
however
, put forward that
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member of
society
is
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, it is
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of
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that should educate to
children
. They believe that
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should take responsibility for teaching,
such
as honesty, resiliency,
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as
children
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most of their time in
school
. They learn how to work and live with people from a wider
society
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. Dealing with others teaches them how to cooperate with each other and
finally
gain social competencies and experience
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in
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entire life.
For instance
, after receiving lessons in civic education at
school
, many Vietnamese students are more willing to help their
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and even strangers, and they feel extremely happy after doing something good for others.
For
this
reason, I believe that
school
lessons are more influential to young
children
.
In conclusion,
although
parents
and schools, in
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, have a responsibility to teach
children
to be useful
members
of
society
, I would argue that fathers and mothers have
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valuable
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because their
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reflects their upbringing.