The chart shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices in 2005, 2006, 2007 and 2008.

The chart shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices in 2005, 2006, 2007 and 2008.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices in 2005, 2006, 2007 and 2008.
The chart gives information about the end of the Year values for 4 international money market indices from 2005 to 2008. As can be seen from the bar chart,
overall
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2007 represented the
bests
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best
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end of the year for both 4 markets indices
although
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to varying degrees,
while
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the
worse
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worst
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period was 2008 which has clearly decreased. Dow Jones value showed a
noticeably
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increase from just above 10000 to more than 12000 in 2005 and 2006, respectively. In 2007 skyrocketed with a value of just under 14000, but plummeted
abruptively
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abruptly
in
the
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2008 with a value
around
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9000. DAX 30 and CAC 40 had nearly the same amount that rose until 2007 with 8000 and just under 8000 respectively, but plunged in 2008 with an
avarage
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average
of just around 5000 and well under 4000 respectively. KOSPI has always been the lowest every
years
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year
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. 2005 and 2006 have been valued with almost the same quantity, in 2007 peaked reaching 2000, but in 2008 reached around 1000 with a modest fall.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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