The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given bar graph provides information on: the changes in the total number of Asian
elephants
in 1997 and 2004. It is obvious that there are some significant changes in the given figure.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the proportion of Asian elephants
in 1997While, and there was a downward trend in 2004 .
According to
the chart, in both Vietnam and Laos
the percentage did not change between 1997 and 2004. Add a comma
Laos,
Nevertheless
, India
Replace the word
Indian
elephants
in 1997 are
higher than in 2004. Malaysia had an increase in numbers reaching 3000 Wrong verb form
were
elephants
in 1997 Which had a dramatic decrease is under 2000 in 2004. Moreover
, there was a period of stability in Sri Lanka in both years. Cambodia and China had the lowest proportions . In contrast
, Myanmar and Thailan
Correct your spelling
Thailand
were
the highest Verb problem
had
number
of Change the noun form
numbers
elephants
in 1997 While
was
the lowest in 2004.Correct subject-verb agreement
were
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words elephants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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