The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.

The chart below gives information on the number of workers in different occupations who migrated to Australia between 2009 and 2012.
The bar chart illustrates the data of
workers
who migrated to Australia for different occupations from 2009 to 2012.
Overall
, all of the fields had figures for the
workers
imported to Australia higher than 10
thousand
with the exception of the Computer programmer.
In addition
, the number of
workers
in Accountant was highest all the time. Looking at the bar chart, Accountants had the highest number of
workers
over a period of 3 years starting from 2009 with 20
thousand
in 2009, dramatically increasing to 28
thousand
in 2010 before slightly going down to 22
thousand
in 2011 and 21
thousand
in 2012. Similar to Accountants, Software engineers
also
started at 19
thousand
before slightly rising to 20
thousand
in 2010 and 21
thousand
in 2011 and ending at 17
thousand
in 2012. As can be seen, Cook fluctuated slightly between 15 and 18
thousand
in the period of time, beginning with 17
thousand
and finishing at 16
thousand
workers
. Especially, the Computer programmer had the smallest data of the 4 fields. It only had 2
thousand
workers
in 2009 and slightly grew up to 4
thousand
before coming back to the back figures and ending with 5
thousand
workers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration patterns
  • Occupation categories
  • Significant growth
  • Labor shortages
  • Booming industries
  • Visa regulations
  • Job market saturation
  • Economic downturns
  • Skill shortages
  • Economic contribution
  • Infrastructure pressure
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic predictions
  • Policy changes
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